This video describes about how to formulate essay in a very simple way to score 79 or higher in PTE writing. I have also provided full essay so that you can get better idea on how to write essay for PTE exam. Please see below:
Introduction
Teaching and learning contribute significantly to the overall development of a child (hook). There is a huge debate on where teaching children at home is better than teaching children at school. [Whether children should be taught at home or school is debatable]. (Address the issue). In my opinion, While (although) some people think that home based teaching is best, a child will only be able to get complete education if sent to school for teaching (your opinion – complex sentence).
Body
(Address the opposite issue) People may argue that (Many people consider that) home is the first school of any child and there are no better teachers than parents for any kid (synonym of child). For example, kids learn about moral education, languages, use of common appliances at their home, which will be highly beneficial to them in the future (This learning experience will have substantial benefit to them in future).
In spite of the arguments of critics (Despite this), children must be sent to school as school education benefits children in various ways. Firstly, children learn about different courses such as maths, science and social education (do not use etc.) in school. These courses helps them get job when they are about to enter the job market. Statistical reports from various countries suggest that a person should at least complete high school to get job (this is example, don’t use for example here as I already used it in above paragraph). Secondly, children will be taught about communication skill and social skills in their school, which is very important in current world. A person with poor communication skill is not marketable and can not cope in the adverse situations.
In addition (additionally), nowadays, almost all government strongly encourage students to complete high school education as education has become inseparable part of the people’s life. In many developed countries, high school education is even free (To support this, most of the developed countries have the provision of free education until a child completes high school education).
Conclusion
In conclusion, although both home based teaching and school based teaching are important for a child, I believe that a child must attend school as schooling enables child to get skills needed to survive in today’s competitive world (paraphrased above points).
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